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:iconkarmaneutral:
KarmaNeutral Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2017
Told'ya we would have lost everybody.
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JustJoeKing Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016
O_o..... 
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EqDBot Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2016
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templar127 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2016
NOT TRUE! NOT TRUE! D:
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:iconstorylover-vodhr:
Storylover-Vodhr Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016   Writer
Aaaaaaand, series end.

Nah, hopefully not. But, could you imagine? XD
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:iconlexni:
Lexni Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Noooooo I am all caught up! Just found this today and read it all the way through. Nooooo
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:iconnightfurion:
NightFurion Featured By Owner Edited Dec 22, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm sure most of the people wants to see Nightmare Moon, and I'm one of them XD (And who doesn't want?), but still I think Willow might tell Luna that she can do this and stuff and Luna tries again, but I still want and hope to see NM
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:iconfireballsandstuff01:
Fireballsandstuff01 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 22, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
We got a edgy princess who will not let go of the past! Well ain't that nice!
I feel as if I was right about Celestia being there, not now, but soon.
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:iconterrortheslayer:
Terrortheslayer Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016
You're never alone Luna, did you forget already? Nightmare Moon is apart of you.
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:iconkushisama:
kushisama Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016
Luna, You're not alone.

Sincerely, disciple of Luna
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:iconbrianna330:
Brianna330 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And then Celestia appears!!!

I'm so calling it now.
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016
You're not useless, Luna. You're lost and limited because Equestria was not prepared for such an attack, but underneath it you're strong and good and you just need a way to show it. The Nightmare isn't the answer.
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:iconcrescentscript:
CrescentScript Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Is this one o' those evil Sombra doors? What with all the eye smoke we've been seeing...
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:iconshadow-ichigo:
Shadow-Ichigo Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
Luna, you're Nightmare
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:iconstargee:
stargee Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Student General Artist
i cried v hard ) ': lunan it will be ok
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:iconsigel4ever:
sigel4ever Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Student General Artist
oh man...
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Fairiegirl101 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My screen wasn't loading right so when I saw Luna say that she tried to do things Celestia's way and that her way was good, I thought you were leading to her turning back into Nightmare Moon and saying "it's time to try things MY way" or something. This is way more sad T-T
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DanielHarrington Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
Ooooh here we go!
THE NIGHTMARE RETURNS!
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:iconmouseanderson:
mouseanderson Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Come back to us Luna, you can do this!
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:iconcarno231:
carno231 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Student Writer
Me: LUNA!!!
Luna: !?!
Me: YOUR SISTER MIGHT HAVE DONE GREATER THINGS THAN YOU!!!
Luna: ...
Me: SHE MIGHT BE STRONGER THAN YOU!!!
Luna: ...
Me: ... BUT! YOU HAVE THE POTENTIAL TO GREATER THINGS!!! YOU CAN!!! YOU CAN SAVE US!!! BUT!!! IT IS YOU THAT DECIDES THAT WE WILL LIVE OR NOT!!!
Spitfire: ... Wow... never thought that you of all mares would say those kind of things...
Me: Thank you... I memorised it from the things I have to say...
Spitfire: Aaand it got sad...
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Sevenscence Featured By Owner Edited Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:iconprincesslunasadplz: :iconsays3plz:I can't save you, Willow!!!:iconsays3eplz:

:iconshockedlunaplz: .  .  .

:iconlunachallengeplz: .  .

:iconlunamadplz: .

:iconnightmarenightplz: :iconsays3plz:No . . . :iconsays3eplz:

:iconnmmevilgrinplz: :iconsays3plz:But I CAN!:iconsays3eplz:
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VentodelCaos Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
Personally, I think i switch the last 2 icon and eliminate the number 4.
Look more coherent.
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Sevenscence Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, good eye, :iconventodelcaos:! A more coherent flow. Your earlier post inspired me, as it were. Well done.
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VentodelCaos Featured By Owner Edited Dec 20, 2016
Thank you my good sir.
there is nothing better to know that my creativity in small things has served to stimulate another human being to be creative themselves.
Whenever I can, I know I've made the world a little bit better.
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:iconcolonelbsacquet:
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
SHOWTIME, MOTHER-BUCKEEEERS!!!
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:iconsevenscence:
Sevenscence Featured By Owner Edited Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Behold, her transfiguration: Malice Malifecum!

Evanescence – Whisper

Fallen angels at my feet
Whispered voices in my ear
Death before my eyes
Lying next to me, I fear:

She beckons me
Shall I give in?

Upon my end shall I begin
Forsaking all I've fallen for
I rise to meet the end . . .

Servatis a periculum!
Servatis a maleficum!
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:iconrobert1087:
Robert1087 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016
Looks like it's Nightmare Time.
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:icongwduncan:
GwDuncan Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Ok her horn did only almost explode, well it was close enough, so called it!
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:iconmoonclaw01:
moonclaw01 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016
Aww Luna you are wrong that you are not weak, useless and alone. You are right that you are not Celestia you are 5x better than her.
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
Five times better than Celestia? Oh, please. This is laughable.

Luna is equally good-like as Celly.
But what has Luna done, in comparison to Celestia?

Ruling an entire nation alone for 1000 years?
Tutoring the most powerful unicorn into forming the current Bearers of Harmony?
Making the decision that led Discord to be reformed, and an occasional ally of Equestria?

All of this was Celestia's doing.
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moonclaw01 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2016
ok look at who almost was on of the first villain almost to defeat Celestia and  let's not forget that she is shown on mlp  more so if Celestia is so much better how come she only shows for like a minute of a glimpse
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AranyaP Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
What about Chrysalis then? She defeated Luna, Celestia, Cadance and the entire mane cast of MLP in the latest episode and was only defeated by bullshit Deus Ex Machina.

Does that make Chrysalis the most powerful of them all? she even defeated Discord too!
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moonclaw01 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016
true I have to admit she did a really good Job on that so truly that queen chrysalis is the most powerful villain cause sh managed to take down all the princess the main 6 discord for days with no suspicion until Starlight Glimmer so yeah but you have to admit that all the villains did really goo on their sceams but Chrysalis has done the best so far for now I just hope another one will pop up and put all of them too sham cause I would love to see that.
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016
At least, Celestia is shown fighting.
But where is Luna, then? Nowhere to be seen.
Easy to claim Luna is undefeated ... when she doesn't fight.

Against the Vine Tree? Against Tirek?
Luna fell to the adverse power as quickly as Celestia.


Despite the appearances, I love both Princesses Sisters equally,
and I consider them to be different, yet on par in terms of power.

But you are making bold claims about Luna, yet you have absolutely nothing to back it up.
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moonclaw01 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2016
look Twilight fought Tirek now if you are saying did she help yes she did as well as Luna and Cadence but what is the Vine tree you ar talking about di you mean the plant that almost killed the tree of harmony.
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
"look Twilight fought Tirek now"

This, I know. :-)



"if you are saying did she help yes she did as well as Luna and Cadence"

Sure. Luna did, Cadence did. But not Celestia?
The thing is that all Princesses got power-sucked by Tirek. (God, that sounds off ...)
So I don't see where Lulu and Cade would have done something, but not Celly.


The Vine Tree? Yes, that one that almost killed the Tree of Harmony, indeed.

It was planted by a seed falling off the bag Discord was nimbling from, when he was fought by the Two Sisters,
even centuries before the NMM incident.
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moonclaw01 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
ok Celestia, Luna and Cadence all gave their powers  to Twilight which did helped her to defeat Terik cause if they all didn't give their powers Twilight would have been no match to Terik and you say you don't have a favorite but you are so insisting that Celestia does the most fight wich is not true. King Sombra was Cadence and Twilight both but the reason you don't see Luna a lot in the battles is because she must sleep during the day (where most of the battles take place.) and she is the princess of the night so she has to sleep during the day.
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:iconpiotreksus:
Piotreksus Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016
You're right Luna just give up, what's the point if you just suck.
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:icongrump-support:
Grump-Support Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Please tell me that Nightmare is about to unleash a can of whoopass on these Juddican assholes.
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Sevenscence Featured By Owner Edited Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
See, my little ponies, the truth of the Nightmare: it never was evil, per se. It never was good, either. Like many things, it just was, and is – a primal force. An amalgam of all the leftover magic from when Equestria was made – that malcontent synergy that was excluded from all that was good and beautiful in Celestia's realm.

But it lived.

It festered and spread, like a phage across the deepest expanses of nebulae and stars; distant, dying planets and barren voids of sound and light. It grew and waited, occasionally finding hosts here and there, finding a vergence, a focal point it could feed from and wreak it havoc. Most of its hosts went mad, destroying their nations or worlds quickly. Some tried to fight the expanse, prolonging their suffering and misery. Only a few (less than I can count on my four hooves) escaped the Nightmare, and only with the help of the Other, of Harmony.

But even after Luna was saved, she was still a prisoner. Every one of her sister's days, she had to fight the stirrings inside, fight against the old feelings of inadequacy, jealousy, and rage.

Oh, rage ... such a powerful and potent friend. Such a cruel mistress. And half of the key to unlocking what Luna thought she'd finally buried in the years since her return from the Moon.

The other key? Despair, which is different from sadness. Despair is loss of all hope. It is feeling not only worthlessness, but hopelessness, sorrow, and the sure knowledge that this will be the end of things if something – drastic enough – is not done.

So the Nightmare waited. It fed off the rage its host felt as her little ponies were eviscerated by the evil doctor's horrific machine. It's inky tentacles gripped the alicorn's heart tighter as her frustration and fear grew upon finding Chrysalis' deception in the North. And finally, as rage slipped into despair at the tower, it whispered ...

Come to me, Princess. No longer need you feel so much for your precious ponies. I am still here. I am still that which can unleash all upon your foes. Simply give yourself to me and you shall no longer feel sadness, fear, or confusion. We shall be one; we shall be Terrible — Regina Tyrannus!

And thus, my little ponies, was the Nightmare unleashed upon Equestria, once more ...

[Excerpted from "Mannis et Prophetias ex Equitibus — The Juddican Wars (3140–3156 A.C.)" by Star Sparkler the Blue, (c) 4101, Equestrian Republic Press]
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
Sorry if I'm being heathen here, but this passage here :

"Most of its hosts went mad, destroying their nations or worlds quickly. Some tried to fight the expanse, prolonging their suffering and misery. Only a few (less than I can count on my four hooves) escaped the Nightmare, and only with the help of the Other, of Harmony.

But even after Luna was saved, she was still a prisoner. Every one of her sister's days, she had to fight the stirrings inside, fight against the old feelings of inadequacy, jealousy, and rage.' "


doesn't sound like the Nightmare is neither good nor bad.

It rather looks plain bad and evil to me, especially the destruction of nations and worlds. :-S


Say ... would you be writing a fanfiction, per chance?

Also, if this is not spoiling too much, what became of Luna, Celestia, and everyone else afterwards?

And why the "Republic" in "Equestrian Republic Press"?

Did the Two Sisters ... ?:iconsadlestia::iconprincesslunasadplz:

Holy Lauren Faust ...


P.S.:
I like how you wrote it in Bible-like style. :-)
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Sevenscence Featured By Owner Edited Dec 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
[Deleted because I realize I'm wall-posting on someone else's page ... sorry, :iconthedracojayproduct:]
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PonyvilleFC11 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016
Holy shit, that's pretty good.
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Sevenscence Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. My head-canon is that she still lives with it, and it's constantly working at her to get out and loose again. It's just waiting for the right moment. This, here, is the right moment, from its point of view. Now it just needs to convince its host to give in, once again. Because it can't take over unless she gives herself to it. That's where her friends come in, though. Like the Element Bearers, they can remind her that she's not alone; she's not worthless. Unfortunately, the Juddicans have successfully divided the party, and that's some amazingly strong magic she has to contend with. Enough to crack her horn from the feedback. The feedback had to be immense and immediately painful enough to cause her to lose all hope and fall into that deep pit of despair. Thus, the perfect time for the Nightmare to reassert herself.

Will she give herself up, though? Will she sacrifice herself to willingly become a host, again? Will she trade herself for the immense power the Nightmare unlocks within?

We'll find out, I'm sure of it.
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PonyvilleFC11 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
I have a gut feeling that she WILL give in to the nightmare, but also find a way to control it as well.
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Precychou Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Student Writer
The drug it's not good, Luna è_é YOU KNOW !
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bbasco2 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016
I'm your dream, make you real
I'm your eyes when you must steal
I'm your pain when you can't feel
Sad but true!

I'm your truth, telling lies
I'm your reasoned alibis
I'm inside, open your eyes
I'm you!
Sad but true!
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